My story about Journey for Europe

1. _Since he always did well on his English tests, his parents were not surprised that he got an A. 2. You should keep the milk in the refrigerator, _so that_ it doesn't go bad. 3. _Although he thinks he's smart, he isn't. 4. You should say goodbye to your brother _before you leave for Europe. 5. Since_ my father has high blood pressure, he has to watch what he eats. My friends and I made a plan to go to Europe. Actually, Most of the plan was maden by one of my Friend. Everyone has a reason to journey. My reason was to feel the atmosphere in Europe, so I didn't need to plan to travel. Just go and Feel. It was my moto. we booked tickets for Europe. It needed much time to arrive Europe. I met an old man whose name is Fransoa. He is French, so he couldn't speak English but He could speak some word. we were eating dinner in the plane. He tried to explain 'cognac'. I drank cognac for the first time. I thought It might be sweet, but reality of cognac flavor was very bitter.

Good morning!^^

Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing your trip to Europe.^^

I would just like to share something. You mentioned that you met someone whose name is \"Fransoa\".

If I remember it right, FRANCOIS in French is pronounced as [fran-shoah].

Just a trivia!^^

Anyway, here are some of the corrections. I hope you\'ll have the time to go over them.^^

Have a nice day!

~T. Nina~

1. _Since he always did well on his English tests, his parents were not surprised that he got an A.

>> Correct!
2. You should keep the milk in the refrigerator, _so that_ it doesn\'t go bad.

>> Correct!
3. _Although he thinks he\'s smart, he isn\'t.

>> Correct!
4. You should say goodbye to your brother _before you leave for Europe.

>> Correct!
5. Since_ my father has high blood pressure, he has to watch what he eats.

>> Correct!
My friends and I made a plan to go to Europe.

>> Correct!
Actually, Most of the plan was maden by one of my Friend.

>> Actually, most of the plans were made by one of my friends.
Everyone has a reason to journey.

>> Everyone has a reason for the journey.

My reason was to feel the atmosphere in Europe, so I didn\'t need to plan to travel.

>> My reason was to feel the atmosphere in Europe, so I didn\'t need a plan to travel.
Just go and Feel.

>> Just go and \"feel\". [it]

It was my moto.

>> It was my motto.
we booked tickets for Europe.

>> We booked tickets for Europe.

It needed much time to arrive Europe.

>> It took us much time to arrive in Europe.
I met an old man whose name is Fransoa.

>> Correct!

He is French, so he couldn\'t speak English but He could speak some word.

>> He is French, so he couldn\'t speak English but he could speak some words.

we were eating dinner in the plane.

>> We were eating dinner in the plane.
He tried to explain \'cognac\'.

>> Correct!

I drank cognac for the first time.

>> Correct!
I thought It might be sweet, but reality of cognac flavor was very bitter.

>> I thought it might be sweet, but in reality, cognac\'s flavor is very bitter.

OR>> I thought it might be sweet, but actually, it is very bitter.