My strengths
학생이 쓴 원문
My strengths are passion, being diligent, Emphasize. To be specific, I am always passionate in many times . My favorite famous saying is your effort will never betray you. Like this sentence I always do my best on time. I can feel a sense of achievement when I get the results I do my best. This will make my life more valuable. Additionally, I am always diligent in many time. I always plan my work in advance and finish my work on time. Also I always wake up in early morning it’s because I like the time of early morning in the morning. I can do many things such as exercising, meditation, cleaning the room and so on. This can make me get energy during a day. Lastly I am good at empathizing with other. So many friends asked me to councel their problem. I do emphasize with my friends first rather then find out solution. It will be a base of student counseling When I become a teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sally!^^
Here are some tips in an interview:
1. Prepare for common interview questions.
2. Practice, practice, practice.
3. Think positive.
4. Speak the right body language.
5. Don\'t give up!
I wish you good luck on your interview. You are smart. Fighting!^^
Teacher Andrea
My strengths are passion, being diligent, Emphasize.
>> My strength is being passionate, diligent and emphatic.
To be specific, I am always passionate in many times.
>> To be specific, I am always passionate in many ways.
My favorite famous saying is your effort will never betray you.
>> Correct
Like this sentence I always do my best on time.
>> Like this sentence, I always do my best every time.
I can feel a sense of achievement when I get the results I do my best.
>> I can feel a sense of achievement when I get the results when I do my best.
This will make my life more valuable.
>> Correct
Additionally, I am always diligent in many time.
>> Additionally, I always diligent.
I always plan my work in advance and finish my work on time.
>> Correct
Also I always wake up in early morning it’s because I like the time of early morning in the morning.
>> I also wake up early in the morning because I am a morning person.
I can do many things such as exercising, meditation, cleaning the room and so on.
>> I can do many things such as exercising, meditation, cleaning the room and many more.
This can make me get energy during a day.
>> These energizes me through out the day.
Lastly I am good at empathizing with other.
>> Lastly, I am good at empathizing with others.
So many friends asked me to councel their problem.
>> So my friends ask me to give them counseling if they have problems.
I do emphasize with my friends first rather then find out solution.
>> I empathize with my friends first before finding a solution.
It will be a base of student counseling When I become a teacher.
>> It will be a basis of student counseling when I become a teacher.
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