my strengths and weaknesses.

2011-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I'm talking about my strengths and weaknesses. My strengths are patience and effort. I have the results obtained so far was done in my efforts and patience. Because I'm not a very smart man, but not even to be good luck. however I thanks to the current position and are satisfied. I get the current year to work hard for employment sought. Of course, I had fallen to the many tests,I have tried to be patient and got good results. I'm ashamed, I speak about my weaknesses. My weakness is that the language skills are weak.However, the language is excluded. I continued studying English at school, but there are still fears about English.I ashamed to speak English in front of others. I call my weakness through the English want to create strengths.

강사 첨삭

Hi! You did a good job in writing this composition! You were able to express your ideas pretty well. I noticed a few mistakes. Please check them out. Have a nice evening! T. Kelly I'm talking about my strengths and weaknesses. >>CorrectMy strengths are patience and effort. >>My strengths are being patient and putting efforts in what i do.I have the results obtained so far was done in my efforts and patience. >> I am where i am now because of my efforts and patience.Because I'm not a very smart man, but not even to be good luck. >>I'm not a very smart man, and I am not even lucky.however I thanks to the current position and are satisfied. >> However, I thank my current position, I am satisfied.I get the current year to work hard for employment sought. >> This year, I have to work hard for my promotion.Of course, I had fallen to the many tests,I have tried to be patient and got good results. >> Of course, I failed in many tests but I have tried to be patient and got good results.I'm ashamed, I speak about my weaknesses. >> I'm ashamed to speak about my weaknesses.My weakness is that the language skills are weak. >> My weakness is about my language skills However, the language is excluded. >>CorrectI continued studying English at school, but there are still fears about English.  >> I continued studying English at school, but I still have fears about English. I ashamed to speak English in front of others. >> I am ashamed to speak English in front of others.I call my weakness through the English want to create strengths. >> My weakness is English but I want to create strengths.

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