my strong point for foreign market sales director
학생이 쓴 원문
Currently my job position is foreign market sales director.
I wnat to explain my strong point as foreign market sales director.
First of all, I can speak four different language Korean, Japanese, Chinese and English.Thank to speaking these language, it is easy for me to make comfortabl mood for conversation and negotiation, using my customer's native language.someone speaking foreign language can easily understand the culture the language is spoken. hence he or she coudl be very good negotiater.
Seccond, I have marketing and strategy knowledge I studied at university.
These knowledge help me set up the strategy how to open up new foreign market or
if there is already market, I can broaden the market, adopting the proper strategy.
However, strategic knowledge will help me work efficently.
강사 첨삭
Hello MR. [이름],
Thank you for giving me information about you.
Now, I have a clearer picture of your goals in life.
I am impressed that you can speak four different languages.
I heard that one of the hardest languages to learn is Chinese.
I hope you can teach me how to speak Chinese and Korean at the same time...kkk
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
Currently my job position is foreign market sales director.
>> I am a foreign market sales director in my current job.I wnat to explain my strong point as foreign market sales director.
>> I want to discuss my position as a foreign market sales director.First of all, I can speak four different language Korean, Japanese, Chinese and English.
>> First of all, I can speak four different languages namely Korean, Japanese, Chinese and English.
Thank to speaking these language, it is easy for me to make comfortabl mood for conversation and negotiation, using my customer\'s native language.
>> I am grateful to know how to speak these four languages because I can easily negotiate and converse with my customers using their own language.
someone speaking foreign language can easily understand the culture the language is spoken.
>> A person who can speak a foreign language can easily communicate with the people speaking the language.
hence he or she coudl be very good negotiater.
>> As a result, he or she can be a very good negotiator.Seccond, I have marketing and strategy knowledge I studied at university.
>> Second, I have a broad knowledge on marketing strategies which I learned from university.These knowledge help me set up the strategy how to open up new foreign market or if there is already market, I can broaden the market, adopting the proper strategy.
>> My broad knowledge on marketing stategies helps me open new foreign markets which broaden my current market and be competitive in the market.
>>However, strategic knowledge will help me work efficently.
>>
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