My students
학생이 쓴 원문
I have searched for the right words that I tried to explain last night. We have a specific word for the rules that I have emphasize every semester. However, it is broken English, so it was hard to describe.
I want my students to have a sense of discretion and judgement. I had read the book called ' We learned everything we need from a kindergarten'. Most people actually know how to behave in the right situation however young they are. I mean, I want students behave themselves in class. Sometimes they make pranks or get rebellious on purpose. I understand what path they are getting through and I try to be open-minded as possible as I can. Even if their mental status is unstable there are some limit that they have to keep. I make an effort to give liberal atmosphere that they are able to ask and answer without any pressure, but some students misunderstand my intention. It usually takes some time to make them get used to my teaching style, but I can't accept their indiscreet behavior.
I feel lucky to meet good students until now except my fist semester at this school. Some of the students have been confused for a while, but they eventually managed to be familiar with my class. So I am so nervous at the beginning of every semester because I meet new faces and I already know that it takes time for them to adapt themselves in my teaching way.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am [이름]! I know that we have our ways to teach. I want to share you this \"The difference between a high quality learning environment and a chaotic disaster will be whether you, the teacher, accept the overriding responsibility to blanket every aspect of your classroom with persistent, fair-but-firm leadership, all the time. Expect good initial efforts from yourself first, flowing into your class results, every day (there are no days off). Don\'t allow yourself to become part of the herd, you should lead.\" Well, I know that you are an effective and great teacher. Aja! Have a good night! Sleep well and sweet dreams.
-Teacher Chloe
I have searched for the right words that I tried to explain last night.
>>I have searched for the right words to explain the thought I was trying to share to you last night.
>>I have searched for the appropriate words to explain the thought I was trying to share to you last night.
We have a specific word for the rules that I have emphasize every semester.
>>We have a specific word for the set of rules that I emphasize every semester.
However, it is broken English, so it was hard to describe.
>>However, it is a broken English so it was hard to describe.
>>However, it is a fragmented English so it was hard to describe. I want my students to have a sense of discretion and judgement.
>>Correct!
I had read the book called \' We learned everything we need from a kindergarten\'.
>>I had read the book called \"We learned everything we need from a kindergarten\".
Most people actually know how to behave in the right situation however young they are.
>>Most people actually know how to behave in the right situation no matter how they young they are.
I mean, I want students behave themselves in class.
>>Correct!
Sometimes they make pranks or get rebellious on purpose. >>Correct!
>>Sometimes they can be rebellious pranksters on purpose.
I understand what path they are getting through and I try to be open-minded as possible as I can.
>>I understand what path they are taking and I try to be open-minded as possibly as I can.
Even if their mental status is unstable there are some limit that they have to keep.
>>Correct!
I make an effort to give liberal atmosphere that they are able to ask and answer without any pressure, but some students misunderstand my intention.
>>I make an effort to give a liberal atmosphere without any pressure, but some students misunderstand my intention.
It usually takes some time to make them get used to my teaching style, but I can\'t accept their indiscreet behavior.
>>Correct!I feel lucky to meet good students until now except my fist semester at this school.
>>I still feel lucky to meet good students except in the first semester of this school year.
Some of the students have been confused for a while, but they eventually managed to be familiar with my class.
>>Correct!
>>Some of the students have been confused for a while, but they eventually managed to get used to my class.
So I am so nervous at the beginning of every semester because I meet new faces and I already know that it takes time for them to adapt themselves in my teaching way.
>>So I am so nervous every beginning of semester because I meet new faces and I know that it takes time for them to adapt themselves to my teaching style.
>>So I am so nervous every beginning of semester because I meet new faces and I know that it takes time for them to adapt themselves to my teaching aproaches and stragies.
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