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Oral rehydration fluids (ORS) and intravenous fluids (IV) are both ways to replete electrolytes. A successful Ebola vaccine should be safe, immunogenic (capable of stimulating an immune response), and practical to use. Although there is limited evidence for the use of convalescent plasma as a therapeutic for Ebola Virus Disease, studies done thus far show a lower case fatality rate. Emory University was the first institution in the United States to treat patients with Ebola Virus Disease. In August 2014, the current Ebola epidemic declared a Public Health Emergency of International Concern. I learn about that The Crude Mortality Rate of 1 death/10,000 persons/day is often used to define the onset of a public health or humanitarian emergency.
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Oral rehydration fluids (ORS) and intravenous fluids (IV) are both ways to replete electrolytes.
>> Oral rehydration fluids (ORS) and intravenous fluids (IV) are both ways to replace lost electrolytes.
A successful Ebola vaccine should be safe, immunogenic (capable of stimulating an immune response), and practical to use.
>> correct
Although there is limited evidence for the use of convalescent plasma as a therapeutic for Ebola Virus Disease, studies done thus far show a lower case fatality rate.
>> Although there is limited evidence for the use of convalescent plasma as therapeutics for Ebola Virus Disease, studies done thus far show a lower case in fatality rate.
Emory University was the first institution in the United States to treat patients with Ebola Virus Disease.
>> correct
In August 2014, the current Ebola epidemic declared a Public Health Emergency of International Concern.
>> In August 2014, the Ebola epidemic caused a declaration of Public Health Emergency of International Concern.
I learn about that The Crude Mortality Rate of 1 death/10,000 persons/day is often used to define the onset of a public health or humanitarian emergency.
>> I learned that the Crude Mortality Rate of 1 death or 10, 000 people per day is often used to define the onset of a public health or humanitarian emergency.
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