My summer activities!
학생이 쓴 원문
I like climbing mountains and camping in the summer.
To be honest, hiking is my most favorite hobby for four seasons.
I love camping in a valley because it is like a routine that is away from the reality that we are busy and tired.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ha!
Good evening and thank you for submitting your answer to me.
You did well in making your composition. ^^
I can also see how much you like nature based on your answer.
I think being close to nature is one of the best ways on how we can truly rest and find happiness. ^^
Have a good night!
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I enjoy climbing mountains and camping in summer season.
To be honest, hiking is my most favorite hobby for four seasons.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Frankly speaking, hiking is the hobby I like the most all year round.
I love camping in a valley because it is like a routine that is away from the reality that we are busy and tired.
I love camping in a valley because it is like a routine that is away from the reality that we are busy and tired.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I love camping in a valley since it is like a custom that is away from the reality of being busy and tired.
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