My summer vacation plan
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Good luck with the things that you want to do.
I just hope that you enjoy your summer vacation.
Tell me about making movies on our next class.
Have a good night!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
I will study about movie and making movie at the academy.
>> I will study about movies and making movies at the academy.
And I want to play baseball.And I will play tennis and watch history movies.
>> I want to play baseball, tennis, and watch movies about history.
It will be wonderful.But I think I don\'t have a time to travel.
>> It will be wonderful to do these things because I think I don\'t have a time to travel.
Summer is hot and I want to spend the summer hot.
>> Summer is hot and I want to spend my time in heat of the summer.
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