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Hi there, Jenny!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I am a multi-tasker and it is very helpful in my job.

I guess yours is a different story. :)

Check my corrections here.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

I\'m not a multi-tasker and I can\'t manage to do more than two things at the same time.

>> CORRECT!

I focus on one thing and then I can do another thing.

>> CORRECT!

then I can\'t do some things a lot at the same time, but I can do it exactly more.

>> I can\'t do a lot of things at the same time.

*I\'m sorry but I don\'t understand what you mean  here. ^^

to be a multi-tasker could be useful to do somethings fast and also, It has save time.

>> Being a multi-tasker could be useful in doing some thing faster and it also saves time.

but It could be difficult to do somethings more deep.

>> But it could be difficult to do some things properly.

in my workplace, I don\'t need to be a multi-tasker.

>> CORRECT!

>> In

when I practice and sing, I have to focus on the lyrics and feeling.

>> When I practice singing, I have to focus on the lyrics and the feeling.

if not, I can\'t give the audience delight and my feeling from the music.

>> If not, I can\'t give the audience delight and I can\'t make them feel the music.

so I have to analysis a song enough and understand about it. 

>> So I have to deeply analyze a song and understand it fully.
 so, the skill is a useful but I think It is different depending on a career.

>> Therefore, I think this skill is useful but it depends on the career.