my task ^^

2011-12-25 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

I walk on the snow street with my husband. we go to the church for Christmas worship. I pray for my family to be more healthy next year. We buy a christmas cake for my family. I turn on the candle on the cake. We sing a song carol. I cook the food for my family. we enjoy christmas party. I wish you a marry Christmas & happy new year ^^

강사 첨삭

Wow! it seemed like you had a very enjoyable Christmas celebration. So glad to know about the activities you did over the weekend. I\'ll see you later in class.   I walk on the snow street with my husband. >>I walk on the street full of snow with my husband. >>Me and my husband go on a walk on the snow. >>I walk on the snow-filled street with my husband.we go to the church for Christmas worship.>>We go to church for Christmas worship. I pray for my family to be more healthy next year.>>Correct We buy a christmas cake for my family.>>We buy christmas cake for my family. I turn on the candle on the cake.>>I light the candle on the cake. We sing a song carol. >>We sing Christmas carols. I cook the food for my family.>>Correct we enjoy christmas party.>>We enjoy the Christmas party.I wish you a marry Christmas & happy new year ^^ >> I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy new year. ^^

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