My teacher JB!!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!!!
Wow! That's so sweet of you! Your teacher seems to be a very good person.
Well, you're very lucky to have a teacher and a best friend at the same time.
It's really hard to look for a real friend nowadays!
-- Janelle --
JB was my man to man teacher.
>>>correct^^
But, we are very close each other until now.
>>>We are very close with each other until now.
we don't have secret in our relationship.
>>>we don't have any secrets in our relationship.
If i had some problems, i always told JB.
>>>If I have problems, I always tell JB.
JB also told me about his problems.
>>>JB also tells me his problems.
He told me, "you are my first student i tell about my secret".
>>>He told me, " You are the first student whom I share my secrets with".
Today, i really miss my teacher.
>>>correct^^
Suddenly i got e-mail from JB. He worte that "Just nothing, I miss you so much today". that's all. i think we have telepathy today.
>>>Finally, I got an e-mail from B. He wrote " Just nothing, I miss you so much today". that's all. I think we are thinking the same thing today.
He is my best teacher and best friend.
>>>He is my best teacher and my best friend.
i really want to see my teacher.
>>>correct^^
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