My teacher JB!!

2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 janel

학생이 쓴 원문

JB was my man to man teacher. But, we are very close each other until now. we don't have secret in our relationship. If i had some problems, i always told JB. JB also told me about his problems. He told me, "you are my first student i tell about my secret". Today, i really miss my teacher. Suddenly i got e-mail from JB. He worte that "Just nothing, I miss you so much today". that's all. i think we have telepathy today. He is my best teacher and best friend. i really want to see my teacher.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!!!

Wow! That's so sweet of you!   Your teacher seems to be a very good person. 

Well,  you're very lucky to have a teacher and a best friend at the same time.

It's really hard to look for a real friend nowadays!

 --  Janelle --

 

  JB was my man to man teacher.

>>>correct^^
But, we are very close each other until now.

>>>We are very close with each other until now.
we don't have secret in our relationship.

>>>we don't have any secrets in our relationship.
If i had some problems, i always told JB.

>>>If I have problems, I always tell JB.
JB also told me about his problems.

>>>JB also tells me his problems.
He told me, "you are my first student i tell about my secret".

>>>He told me, " You are the first student whom I share my secrets with".
Today, i really miss my teacher.

>>>correct^^
Suddenly i got e-mail from JB. He worte that "Just nothing, I miss you so much today". that's all. i think we have telepathy today.

>>>Finally, I got an e-mail from B.  He wrote "  Just nothing, I miss you so much today".  that's all.  I think we are thinking the same thing today.
He is my best teacher and best friend.

>>>He is my best teacher and my best friend.
i really want to see my teacher.

>>>correct^^

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