My teacher Wendy

2013-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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If there is one[1] word that would best describe you, what would it be and why? Explain your answer in not less than 3 sentences. :) Hi Wendy! What a beautiful weather it is! Today is a lovely sunny day. I would rather be outside insteading on sitting on chair. I hope you have a great day. Anyway, I feel lazy to do anything today.:( What word would I describe me that? I would like to express bymyself one word that a rolling stone. I am not perfetc, I am not smart, but I make an effort constantly. See you soon

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Hi there! How\'s it going Mr. [Name]? :) Did you listen to the song? I said SHAMELESS would be the word that would describe me, I was thinking of a better answer and I think the right word should be FEARLESS. I am never afraid of taking risk. Your word is good too. I think the word that can describe you is Happy. You\'re always laughing! :) See you! -T. WENDY :) Hi Wendy!>> Correct What a beautiful weather it is! >> Correct Today is a lovely sunny day. >>Correct I would rather be outside insteading on sitting on chair. >> I would rather go outside than sit on a chair. OR >>> I would rather be outside instead of sitting on a chair. I hope you have a great day. >>Correct Anyway, I feel lazy to do anything today.:(>> Correct What word would I describe me that? >> What word could describe myself? I would like to express bymyself one word that a rolling stone. >>I would like to express myself as a rolling stone.  I am not perfetc, I am not smart, but I make an effort constantly. >> I am not perfect, I am not smart, but I make an effort constantly.See you soon  >>Correct

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