My teacher Wendy
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If there is one[1] word that would best describe you, what would it be and why? Explain your answer in not less than 3 sentences. :)
Hi Wendy!
What a beautiful weather it is! Today is a lovely sunny day. I would rather be outside insteading on sitting on chair. I hope you have a great day.
Anyway, I feel lazy to do anything today.:(
What word would I describe me that? I would like to express bymyself one word that a rolling stone. I am not perfetc, I am not smart, but I make an effort constantly.
See you soon
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Hi there!
How\'s it going Mr. [Name]? :)
Did you listen to the song?
I said SHAMELESS would be the word that would describe me,
I was thinking of a better answer and I think the right word should be FEARLESS.
I am never afraid of taking risk.
Your word is good too.
I think the word that can describe you is Happy.
You\'re always laughing! :)
See you!
-T. WENDY :)
Hi Wendy!>> Correct What a beautiful weather it is!
>> Correct
Today is a lovely sunny day.
>>Correct
I would rather be outside insteading on sitting on chair.
>> I would rather go outside than sit on a chair.
OR
>>> I would rather be outside instead of sitting on a chair.
I hope you have a great day.
>>Correct Anyway, I feel lazy to do anything today.:(>> Correct What word would I describe me that?
>> What word could describe myself?
I would like to express bymyself one word that a rolling stone.
>>I would like to express myself as a rolling stone.
I am not perfetc, I am not smart, but I make an effort constantly. >> I am not perfect, I am not smart, but I make an effort constantly.See you soon
>>Correct
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