My teacher will go another school.

2016-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Tommorw is the last day in 5th grade.I will be a 6th grade student.And my teacher will go another school.I like my teacher.He was good and liked playing soccer and baseball and many activities.Also,he didn't give many homework.He scolds a little too.And we can talk with each other and we can be free.My classmates are good at game.We almost won the game.(except one match).Almost last Monday my one friend was go to the another school.I am interested in baseball because of my classmate.But my mom disturb me to see a baseball.I want to be a same class with my three friend in my classmate.And I hate 4people.I don't want to be a same class with them.5th grade is over and I can't here my classmate teacher's interesting joke.I am a little sad.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Good afternoon.

Hey, chill! Don\'t be sad. I know that you miss all of your

teachers but you have to move on.

Maybe your teachers in the 6th grade are as good as your 5th grade teachers.

Who knows. :) :)

Enjoy the next chapter of your life, [이름]! ^^ :)

See you in our class. :)


~~ Teacher Kris



Tomorrow is the last day in 5th grade.

>> Correct

I will be a 6th grade student.

>> Correct

And my teacher will go another school.

>> And, my teachers will go to another school.

I like my teacher.

>> Correct

He was good and liked playing soccer and baseball and many activities.

>> He is good; he likes playing soccer, baseball and many activities.

Also,he didn\'t give many homework.

>> Correct

He scolds a little too.

>> Correct

And we can talk with each other and we can be free.

>> Correct

My classmates are good at game.We almost won the game.(except one match).

>> My classmates were good at the game. We almost won the games except for one match.

Almost last Monday my one friend was go to the another school.

>> Last Monday, one of my friends went to another school.

I am interested in baseball because of my classmate.

>> I got interested in baseball because of my classmate.

But my mom disturb me to see a baseball.

>> But, my mom disturbs when I get to see baseball.

I want to be a same class with my three friend in my classmate.

>> I want be in the same class with my three friends and with my classmate.

And I hate 4people.

>> I hate those other four people.

I don\'t want to be a same class with them.

>> I don\'t want to be in the same class with them.

5th grade is over and I can\'t here my classmate teacher\'s interesting joke.

>> 5th grade is over and I cannot listen to my teacher\'s interesting jokes anymore.

I am a little sad.

>> Correct

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