My teenage years
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Joseph,
Thank you for sharing me your thoughts about studying. You are still young and you have seen the error of your ways already. There are many people who can\'t realize they committed some mistakes until it\'s too late. Anyway, you are still young and you are trying to do what is best for your future so good job. Have a great weekend and I\'ll see you again hopefully on Monday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Everyone is going through puberty.
>>Everyone goes through puberty.
Puberty is teenages.
>>Puberty is our teen age days.
Teengers are a very meaningful in Korea.
>>When you become a teenager, it is very meaningful in Korean culture.
People say \"To study in a teenages makes a decision his whole life\" That is true.
>>People say that to study when you are a teenager like you are making a decision for your whole life. That is true.
The university which he entered was right and left the rest of his life.
>>The university you enter will make or break your life.
Therefore teens studied as if his life depended on it.
>>Therefore teens study like their life depend on it.
This is a sad reality, but it is true.
>>correct!
When I was a teens, I was wandering a little, too.
>>When I was a teenager, I wandered a little too.
I was not so sure I went to the school.
>>I was not sure why I went to school.
Until become second grade high school, I studied to have my mind.
>>Until I was in second year high school, I didn\'t really mind studying.
I regret that time.
>>I regretted that time.
But the time had passed.
>>correct!
I\'m doing my best now.
>>correct!
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