My the biggiest goal in life is not expected too high I thought.
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After I graduate the high school I fail to enter the university.
>> I failed to enter the university after I graduated high school.
In this course I more or less taste a bitter flavor of life.
>> In this course, I more or less taste a bitter flavor of life.
failing to enter the university I revive the violin for the purpose of entering university.
>> I repaired violins for me to enter the university.
Now I am working at a company and I am doing it with coworkers who have a disadvantage in body.
>> Now, I am working at a company and I am doing it with my coworkers who have disabilities.
I am working with them.
>> CORRECT
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