My the biggiest goal in life is not expected too high I thought.

2018-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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After I graduate the high school I fail to enter the university. In this course I more or less taste a bitter flavor of life. failing to enter the university I revive the violin for the purpose of entering university. Now I am working at a company and I am doing it with coworkers who have a disadvantage in body. I am working with them. Thanks for reading.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

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After I graduate the high school I fail to enter the university.

>> I failed to enter the university after I graduated high school.


In this course I more or less taste a bitter flavor of life.
>> In this course, I more or less taste a bitter flavor of life.


failing to enter the university I revive the violin for the purpose of entering university.
>> I repaired violins for me to enter the university.


Now I am working at a company and I am doing it with coworkers who have a disadvantage in body.

>> Now, I am working at a company and I am doing it with my coworkers who have disabilities.


I am working with them.
>> CORRECT


Thanks for reading.

>> CORRECT

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