My thought about lazy people

Hello [이름]!

I always think that you are a hardworking student.

I hope you keep up the good work.

I also hope that you keep the corrections in mind.

Familiarize yourself with the included common expressions.

Use them in your sentences every day.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

While I was having my hair straighten and curled at a hair shop, I wrote this journal at a hair shop yesterday.

>> While I was having my hair straightened and curled at a hair shop yesterday, I wrote this essay.

There\'s nothing except sitting on the seat for 4 hours.

>> There was nothing to do but sit on a chair for 4 hours. 

So I asked a staff to get me a pen and some paper to write on.

>> That\'s why I asked an employee to get me a pen and some paper to write on.

Every mins and every second I like to do something not to get bored.

>> I like to keep myself busy at every minute and every second of the day.

Does it mean that I am not a lazy person? ^^

>> Correct
First,Thinking of lazy people, they tend to be present- satisfying people.

>> First, lazy people tend to focus on present satisfaction.

They might not have short and long term goals for their lives of the future.

>> They might not have short and long term goals for their lives in the future.

Second, they are apt not to use their brain and body, and not control and manage their mind, time and the body.

>> Second, they are not used to relying on their brains and bodies and they can not control and manage their mind, time and the body.

Third, they have low self-esteem and specific goad and dream, resulting in haivng low energy, motivation and no disire to make a exact plan.

>> Third, they have low self-esteem and they don\'t have specific goals and dreams which result in having low energy, motivation and desire to make an exact plan.

Fourth, They have no intellectual sensibility and brain power.

>> Correct

Therefore they have low income and no chance to have cutural benefits.

>> Therefore they have low income and and they don\'t have any chance to have cultural benefits. 
They don\'t deserve to get some cookies in reality world,

>>  They don\'t deserve to get some cookies in the real world.

No pain, no gain.

>> We say, \"No Pain, No Gain.\"

and Being lazy, no cookie.

>> Similarly, we can say, \"Be lazy, no cookie.\"