My thought about setting a future goal
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I met my university freind who is preparing for the entrance exam for pharmacology school.I told her that I want to go to a very good medical school and she was doubtable that I'm getting accepted by that school. She said there are many people who study hard and are good at studying. So, I'd better think that I can go to several good schools sincegetting into medical schools is very competitive I know that is very hard and I may not be able to do it. But I think that if I don' think I can do it, it will never happen. So, my thought is that have a big dream, do my best, if I can't get it, just accept the result. I know It will be hard to do it and I am also a little bit worried that I fail the test. But there is no better idea.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I agree that taking up medicine as a major is really difficult. You have to read a lot of books, memorize muscles, parts of the body and bones and their functions and all the illnesses and their cure. But if you would really strive hard, you will make it! Think positive and believe in yourself! Good luck!
-RJ
Today, I met my university freind who is preparing for the entrance exam for pharmacology school.
>> Today, I met my University friend who is preparing for the entrance exam in a Pharmacology school.
I told her that I want to go to a very good medical school and she was doubtable that I'm getting accepted by that school.
>> I told her I wanted to go to a very good medical school and she was doubtful that I’m getting accepted in that school.
She said there are many people who study hard and are good at studying.
>> She said there are many students who study hard and are good in studying.
So, I'd better think that I can go to several good schools sincegetting into medical schools is very competitive I know that is very hard and I may not be able to do it.
>> So, I’d better think hard which school I should go to since medical schools are competitive and I also fear I may not be able to make it.
But I think that if I don' think I can do it, it will never happen.
>> I also think that if I have to be optimistic.
So, my thought is that have a big dream, do my best, if I can't get it, just accept the result.
>> So my dream is to pass and do my best to be accepted.
I know It will be hard to do it and I am also a little bit worried that I fail the test.
>> I know it will be hard for me to fulfill it and I am also a bit worried that I might fail the test.
But there is no better idea.
>> But I have no choice but to take the exams.
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