My thoughts about my younger brother

He needs to figure out something for him. That is just the way he has to do by himself. My parents ask my opinions about him alomost everytime. I feel pretty much pressure on me. A few days ago, I asked my parents not to ask my opinions about him. He is twenty years old. He has the ability to figure something out by himself. It turned out that he failed to be accepted by the university but it may be able to make it if somebody doesn't want to go to the college. I just told him that I love him.

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I hope to read more from you. Take care!

-RJ-

 

He needs to figure out something for him.

>>Correct!

That is just the way he has to do by himself.

>>Correct!

My parents ask my opinions about him alomost everytime.

>>Correct!

>>Be careful with spelling: almost

I feel pretty much pressure on me.

>>I feel much pressure given to me.

A few days ago, I asked my parents not to ask my opinions about him.

>>Correct!

He is twenty years old.

>>Correct!

He has the ability to figure something out by himself.

>>Correct!

It turned out that he failed to be accepted by the university but it may be able to make it if somebody doesn't want to go to the college.

>>It turned out that he failed to be accepted in the university but he may be able to make it if another student backs out his application.

I just told him that I love him.

>>Correct!