My thoughts on the past class

2020-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

I think my English Level is to lack. I\'m good at listening, but it\'s hard to say. So, I want my teacher to teach me more things. The reason why I started to learn English is because I want travel without interpreter. I hope to travel all over the world. And someday I will live in another country.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me! Please don\'t worry! We just have to make an effort to meet your needs. We will study English well, so you can travel around the world without a need of an interpreter! -Faith-

I think my English Level is to lack.

>>  I think I lack English skills.

I\'m good at listening, but it\'s hard to say.

>>I\'m good at listening, but it\'s hard to express myself.
 So, I want my teacher to teach me more things.

>> Correct
 The reason why I started to learn English is because I want travel without interpreter.

>> The reason why I started to learn English is because I want to travel without an interpreter.
 I hope to travel all over the world.

>> Correct
 And someday I will live in another country.

>> And someday, I will live in another country.

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