My tooth have taken out!!

2017-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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My tooth has taken out today. I was surprised. It feel good. I want to take out it and I did it. My mom and two sisters was surprised, too. This is one of my best days! I am going to put it under my pillow this night, so the tooth fairy will take it and give me a coin.I am so exiting to get a coin.^^

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름].


Thank you so much for answering your homework. Good job :). I\'ll see you in our next class.


Teacher Travis.


My tooth has taken out today.

>>Correct.

>>OR: I have a tooth extraction today.

 I was surprised. It feel good.

>>Correct.

>>OR: I was surprised, I feel good.

I want to take out it and I did it.

>>I want to take it out and I did it.
My mom and two sisters was surprised, too.

>>My mother and my sisters was also surprised.

 This is one of my best days! I am going to put it under my pillow this night, so the tooth fairy will take it and give me a coin.

>>Correct.
I am so exiting to get a coin.^^

>>I\'m so excited to get a coin.

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