My toy
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a child, I could spend 10 cent to buy a toy. The toy wasn\'t nice, and didn\'t have functions. Although I should assembly it, I love it.
강사 첨삭
When I was a child, I could spend 10 cent to buy a toy.
>> When I was a child, I could spend 10 cents to buy a toy.
The toy wasn\'t nice, and didn\'t have functions.
>> The toy wasn\'t nice and didn\'t have a lot of functions.
Although I should assembly it, I love it.
>> Although I should assemble it, I still loved it.
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