My trip to Busan

I went to Busan for one night and two days with my younger brother. First of all, we went to seashore and had a nice dinner. There is a bridge called Gwang-an. It was the first time to see it closely. When I saw it, I came up with Bay bridge since both of them have two stroies with only one way. Today, I went to a market called international market. There were several goods imported from Japan. I think that's way its name is international market. I bought a sweater made in Japan there. The most interesting thing was food for nimbling. I heard that fried rice cake with black sugar and seeds is really good. So, I asked many people where it is and finally I had it. It was really good. The dough was crispy and thick enough to chew and it was not very sweet.

Hi [이름]! Wow! I am so glad you enjoyed your vacation in Busan. It is also good that you were able to experience a good day in Busan and you were able to try new things. I hope that wherever you go, you will have the same enjoyment you experience. Take care! ^_^ I went to Busan for one night and two days with my younger brother. >> I went to Busan and stayed there for one night and two days with my younger brother. First of all, we went to seashore and had a nice dinner. >> First, we went to the seashore and had a nice dinner. There is a bridge called Gwang-an. >> There was a bridge called Gwang-an.  It was the first time to see it closely. >> It was the first time we’ve seen it closely. When I saw it, I came up with Bay bridge since both of them have two stroies with only one way. >> When I saw it, I came up to the bay of the bridge since it was a two-storey bridge. Today, I went to a market called international market. >> Today, I went to a market called International Market. There were several goods imported from Japan. >> Correct  I think that's way its name is international market. >> I think that is why it is called International Market. I bought a sweater made in Japan there. >> I bought a sweater made in Japan.  The most interesting thing was food for nimbling. >> The most interesting thing was the food for nibbling.  I heard that fried rice cake with black sugar and seeds is really good. >> Correct So, I asked many people where it is and finally I had it. >> Correct  It was really good. >> Correct The dough was crispy and thick enough to chew and it was not very sweet. >> Correct