My trip to Daejeon {7/27~7/29}
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to swimming pool in 9 am to 10 am.
Then I start to went Deajeon.
I arive to Deajeon in 1 pm.
I see my cousin.
Then in 4pm,we went to swimming pool.
We play 1 hour.
Then we went home.
2nd day,I played peano a lot.
And we went to Currency museum and Geological museum.
It was very fun!!!!!
Last day,we went to grandmother\'s home(with cousin).
We played at there.
It was very fun and good.
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
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Jean
I went to swimming pool in 9 am to 10 am.
>> I was at the swimming at 9 to 10 am.
Then I start to went Deajeon.
>> Then we started for Deajeon.
I arive to Deajeon in 1 pm.
>> We arrived in Daejeon at 1 pm.
I see my cousin.
>> I saw my cousin.
Then in 4pm,we went to swimming pool.
>> Then at 4 pm, we went to the swimming pool.
We play 1 hour.
>> We played together for 1 hour.
Then we went home.
>> CORRECT~~
2nd day,I played peano a lot.
>> On the second day, I played the piano a lot.
And we went to Currency museum and Geological museum.
>> We also went to the Currency Museum and the Geological Museum.
It was very fun!!!!!
>> CORRECT~~
Last day,we went to grandmother\'s home(with cousin).
>> On the last day, together with my cousin, we went to my grandmother\'s home.
We played at there.
>> We played there.
It was very fun and good.
>> It was very fun and I had a wonderful time.
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