my trivial prediction.

2011-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Whitney

학생이 쓴 원문

So I made that prediction from the beginning. The professionals are not the people decided inherently but the class who amassed skills in the course of their life[이름]e. I expect that this class comes out as soon as possible to eliminate the irrationality and inefficiency of the pass decades still prevalent these days and to pioneer the 21-century.As you know, assessed as a malicious guy or a man of self-assertion, I express my ideas being free from a difficulty. I’m reproved by the people defending the old order. Taking a backward glancing of 25-years, I have lots of experiences that the suggestions and the ideas of mine are materialized.

강사 첨삭

Here is the second part, [이름]. :) Whew! Hahaha! :P So I made that prediction from the beginning. >> So I made that prediction from the beginning. The professionals are not the people decided inherently but the class who amassed skills in the course of their life[이름]e. >> The professionals are not the people who decided inherently but the class who amassed skills in the course of their life[이름]e. I expect that this class comes out as soon as possible to eliminate the irrationality and inefficiency of the pass decades still prevalent these days and to pioneer the 21-century. >> I expect that this class comes out as soon as possible to eliminate the irrationality and inefficiency of the pass decades still prevalent these days and to pioneer the 21st-century. As you know, assessed as a malicious guy or a man of self-assertion, I express my ideas being free from a difficulty. >> Assessed as a malicious guy or a man of self-assertion, I express my ideas being free from difficulty. I’m reproved by the people defending the old order. >> I am reproved by the people defending the old order. Taking a backward glancing of 25-years, I have lots of experiences that the suggestions and the ideas of mine are materialized. >> Taking a backward glance from the past 25-years, I have a lot of experiences that my suggestions and ideas are materialized.

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