my ultimate gaming computer
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i have been greedy for electronics. especially on the computer. actually, i don\'t do computer game which need high spec computer. but i always wanted to have an expensive computer. in fact, i never know about computer hardware. but i know the more expensive computer the better. so later, if i can afford a such computer, i will buy a computer that costs at least 3000 dollars.
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i have been greedy for electronics.
>> I have been greedy for electronics.
especially on the computer.
>> especially for computers.
actually, i don\'t do computer game which need high spec computer.
>> Actually, I don\'t play computer games that needs a high specifications computer.
but i always wanted to have an expensive computer.
>> but I\'ve always wanted to have an expensive computer.
in fact, i never know about computer hardware.
>> In fact, I don\'t know a lot about computer hardware.
but i know the more expensive computer the better.
>> but I know that the more expensive the computer, the better.
so later, if i can afford a such computer, i will buy a computer that costs at least 3000 dollars.
>> So someday, if I can afford such a computer, I will buy a computer that costs at least 3000 dollars.
Hi there, George!
Thank you for answering your homework! Great Job!
Please consider my corrections. Please always remember that
In English, the nominative form of the singular first-person pronoun,
\"I\", is normally capitalized, along with all its contractions (I\'ll, I\'m, etc.)
Keep up the good work and see you on our next class!
~ T. Louise ♥♥
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