My uncle.

2010-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 janel

학생이 쓴 원문

I met my uncle last week. He wasn't really that diffrent than what I thought. He asked me how New york was? I answered him I had a lot of fun in there. In his life, when he was young, he was really 100% great at English. Now, he usually travels around the world because he is great at English. He graduated in Cornell in United states. He also went to Africa for his work. I wish I will graduate university in there too!! Now, I knew that how English language was important.

강사 첨삭

Wow, what a cool uncle. Hope you get to be one like him too. Here are your corrections-  Teacher JM   I met my uncle last week.>>>CorrectHe wasn't really that diffrent than what I thought.>>>He wasn't really as different as I thought.He asked me how New york was?>>>He asked me how New York was.I answered him I had a lot of fun in there.>>>I answered him by saying that I had a lot of fun there.In his life, when he was young, he was really 100% great at English.>>>When he was young, he was really 100% great at English.Now, he usually travels around the world because he is great at English.>>>CorrectHe graduated in Cornell in United states.>>>CorrectHe also went to Africa for his work.>>>CorrectI wish I will graduate university in there too!!>>>I wish to graduate in that university too!!Now, I knew that how English language was important.>>>Now, I know how the English language is important.

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