My university

Today, I’d like to write about my university. Like other countries, university ranking is very important in Korea. The first in Korea is ‘Seoul National University’ and it is a public school. Next is ‘Yonsei’ and ‘Korea’ University and they are private schools. I attend Yonsei University and I’m major in Public Administration in there. My University is a Christian mission school. Dr. [Name] who was a missionary from U.K. built it in 1886. Also, school motto is that “the truth will set you free” written in the gospel according to St. John. Because of this, All freshmen and sophomore have to take Chapels. We have a lot of alumni who are doing pivotal roles in various fields. I’m proud of my university and I like it.

Rainy afternoon!^^ I’m so proud that you are studying in one of the best schools in Korea! ^^ And I do believe that you will be one of the school’s good products someday. I know that you will be the mayor of Korea someday... haha.. just kidding! Well, you'll never know right?... And it is good to know that you are using the vocabulary words from the book. That is one way of improving. Keep it up! Here are your corrections: Today, I’d like to write about my university. >>Correct!Like other countries, university ranking is very important in Korea. >>Correct!The first in Korea is ‘Seoul National University’ and it is a public school. >>The first in rank in Korea is “Seoul National University, a public school.Next is ‘Yonsei’ and ‘Korea’ University and they are private schools. >>Next in rank is Yonsei, followed by Korea University. Bothe are private schools.I attend Yonsei University and I’m major in Public Administration in there. >> I’m going to Yonsei University. I’m majored in Public Administration.My University is a Christian mission school. >>Correct!Dr. [Name] who was a missionary from U.K. built it in 1886. >>Correct!Also, school motto is that “the truth will set you free” written in the gospel according to St. John. >> Correct!Because of this, All freshmen and sophomore have to take Chapels. >>Beacause of this, all freshmen and sophomores have to go to the Chapel.We have a lot of alumni who are doing pivotal roles in various fields. >>Excellent vocabulary. ^^I’m proud of my university and I like it. Correct! J