My unlucky day.
학생이 쓴 원문
The day before yesterday, my cell phone was locked by mistake.
It was really worse.
Because I don't know my password.
So, I can't call anyone with my phone, but I can answer that call to me.
I really tried to do everythings for my password.
It was really bad,and if I want to know the password, I have to go to somewhere to find it out.
I hope,I could find out my own password soon.
Now,I know why I can't use my own password.
When we forget it, we can never find out it.
If you forget your password, you'll get in big trouble.
강사 첨삭
I hope you get to fix your problem.;) Here are your corrections:
-Teacher JM
The day before yesterday, my cell phone was locked by mistake.
>>>The day before yesterday, my cell phone got locked by mistake.It was really worse.
>>It was really bad because I didn't know my password.Because I don't know my password.
>>>So, I can't call anyone with my phone but I can take incoming calls.So, I can't call anyone with my phone, but I can answer that call to me.
>>>CorrectI really tried to do everythings for my password.
>>>I really tried to do everything for my password.It was really bad,and if I want to know the password, I have to go to somewhere to find it out.>>>It was awful. And if I wanted to know the password, I have to go to somewhere to find it out.I hope,I could find out my own password soon.
>>>CorrectNow,I know why I can't use my own password.>>>Now I know why I can't use my own password.When we forget it, we can never find out it.
>>>When we forget it, we can never find it out.If you forget your password, you'll get in big trouble.
>>>Correct
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