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2020-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I was rest from last friday. but I was very busy holidays . I went to fishing on friday. I caught only two . but my wife caught eight. She was luck always. She was big fish about 60 centimeter. I went to my mother house. My wife gave my mother Ringer. My wife was nurse. I was very busy yesterday because my two daughter. I took my first daughter to qualification test site at morning. I and my wife cleaned my house at afternoon because second daught\'s boy friend . He is going to come house today. He is soldier. we are going to eat lunch toghter. and then I am going to fix bathroom door. I want to rest for only myself. but I am father and son.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. Good luck today then.

I was rest from last friday. but I was very busy holidays .

>>> I\'ve been on a day off since Friday but I\'ve been busy on the holidays.

I went to fishing on friday.

>>> I went fishing on Friday.

I caught only two . but my wife caught eight.

>>> I caught only two but my wife caught eight.

She was luck always.

>>> She was always lucky.

She was big fish about 60 centimeter.

>>> She caught a big fish which is about 60 centimetres long.

I went to my mother house.

>>> I went to my mother\'s house.
My wife gave my mother Ringer.

>>> correct.
My wife was nurse.

>>> My wife was a nurse.

I was very busy yesterday because my two daughter.

>>> I was very busy yesterday because of my two daughters.

I took my first daughter to qualification test site at morning.

>>> I took my first daughter to the qualification test site in the morning.

I and my wife cleaned my house at afternoon because second daught\'s boy friend . He is going to come house today.

>>> I and my wife cleaned my house in the afternoon because my second daughter\'s boy friend will visit today.

He is soldier.

>>> He is a soldier.

we are going to eat lunch toghter.

>>> We are going to eat lunch together.

and then I am going to fix bathroom door.

>>> then I am going to fix the bathroom door.
I want to rest for only myself. but I am father and son.

>>> I want to rest by myself but I am a father and a son.

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