My vacation

This vacation was 30th July ~ 5th August. In this vacation, I spent almost time with my son. at that time my wife went to train about her job, so we could not spend together. I go to my uncle's house with my parents, sister and niece. My uncle's house is located under the mountain, so there is cool, we forgot the hot weather. My son and niece played with dog, and caught a dragonfly, I read some book that usually can't read. It's good time to me

Hi there, Thanks for your effort once again. I want you to study the corrections I provideed for you. See you again in our class  tomorrow and thanks for today\'s class. You always impress me. Keep  it up!^^ T.Nica ^^ This vacation was 30th July ~ 5th August. >> This vacation happened las t July 30  to August 5. In this vacation, I spent almost time with my son. >> During this vacation, I spent almost all of my time with my son. at that time my wife went to train about her job, so we could not spend together. >> At that time my wife went on a training for her so we couldn\'t spend it together.I go to my uncle\'s house with my parents, sister and niece. >> I went to my uncles\'s house with my parents, my sister and niece. My uncle\'s house is located under the mountain, so there is cool, we forgot the hot weather. >> My uncle\'s house is located under the mountain that\'s why it\'s very cool and it makes us forget the hot weather.My son and niece played with dog, and caught a dragonfly, I read some book that usually can\'t read. >> My son and niece played with the dog and caught a dragonfly. I also read some books  that I usually don\'t read. It\'s good time to me >> It\'s a really good time for me.