My vacation 2020
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your mention about my vacation without COVID19.
It is my hope that you mentioned.
I will go to the Spain that it is located in my company.
If I go there, I will visit my company. And I want to go walking route that it is famous in Spain.
With my wife, I like to walk there.
But still we must stay at home bacause of dangerous outside.
Korean people like to go trip. If it was not Covid19, many person are going to go abroad before being Aug.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]~ Thank you for doing your homework. You did great.
Here are your corrections:
Thank you for your mention about my vacation without COVID19.
>> Thank you for mentioning about having COVID19 involved.
>> I hoped that you mentioned that.
>> I will go to Spain where my company is located.
>> If I go there, I will visit my company and I will walk around the famous places in Spain.
>> I want to walk there with my wife.
>> But still, we must stay at home because of the dangers outside.
>> Korean people like going to trips.
If it was not Covid19, many person are going to go abroad before being Aug.
>> If there was no COVID19, many people would\'ve gone abroad before August.
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