My vacation!

2013-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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Wow~ It's summer vacation~~^^ I can take a nap~^^ But,,, I still busy.... I must go to academy~ I must do my vacation homework!!!! Ha,, and during this vacation, we don't go on a trip! I'm so sad, I want to go on a trip! I want to play with my friends!! I think, my vacaion is good and bad... Fighting~!! Sarah!!!

강사 첨삭

Good day! How are you doing?

I hope you\'re fine. I already checked your composition and I can say that you\'re really trying your best to express your thoughts in English.

That\'s a good practice. Just be patient in doing your homework and always put your best in everything you do.

Don\'t give up because you will soon be proficient in English.^^

~T. Heidi~

Wow~ It\'s summer vacation~~^^

>>Wow! It\'s already summer vacation.

I can take a nap~^^

>>I can already sleep.
But,,, I still busy....

>>But, I\'m still busy.
I must go to academy~ I must do my vacation homework!!!!

>>I must go to school and do my homework during my vacation.
Ha,, and during this vacation, we don\'t go on a trip!

>>Ha! We didn\'t even go on a trip during this vacation. 
I\'m so sad, I want to go on a trip!

>>Correct!

I want to play with my friends!!

>>I also want to play with my friends.

I think, my vacaion is good and bad...

>>I think, my vacation is good; but at the same time, it\'s bad
Fighting~!! Sarah!!!

>> Fighting! Sarah!

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