My vacation!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day! How are you doing?
I hope you\'re fine. I already checked your composition and I can say that you\'re really trying your best to express your thoughts in English.
That\'s a good practice. Just be patient in doing your homework and always put your best in everything you do.
Don\'t give up because you will soon be proficient in English.^^
~T. Heidi~
Wow~ It\'s summer vacation~~^^
>>Wow! It\'s already summer vacation.
I can take a nap~^^
>>I can already sleep.
But,,, I still busy....
>>But, I\'m still busy.
I must go to academy~ I must do my vacation homework!!!!
>>I must go to school and do my homework during my vacation.
Ha,, and during this vacation, we don\'t go on a trip!
>>Ha! We didn\'t even go on a trip during this vacation.
I\'m so sad, I want to go on a trip!
>>Correct!
I want to play with my friends!!
>>I also want to play with my friends.
I think, my vacaion is good and bad...
>>I think, my vacation is good; but at the same time, it\'s bad
Fighting~!! Sarah!!!
>> Fighting! Sarah!
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