My view about Euthanasia
학생이 쓴 원문
Euthanasia is very hard for me to judge right and wrong.
Korean people have lived under the culture of Confucius.
In terms of Confucius, people\'s lives is most important among the all things.
However, the people who are young tend to set importance on own\'s selection in their life.
As a young people, I suppose it is reasonable for some people who undergone hard time from disease.
It is not consistent every time for me, and I do not think it is only answer for us to judge it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ed! :)
Korean people have lived under the culture of Confucius.
In terms of Confucius, people\'s lives is most important among the all things.
However, the people who are young tend to set importance on own\'s selection in their life.
As a young people, I suppose it is reasonable for some people who undergone hard time from disease.
It is not consistent every time for me, and I do not think it is only answer for us to judge it.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Euthanasia is very hard for me to judge right and wrong.
>> Euthanasia is very hard for me to judge whether it\'s right or wrong.
Korean people have lived under the culture of Confucius.
>> Korean people have been living under the culture of Confucius.
In terms of Confucius, people\'s lives is most important among the all things.
>> In terms of Confucius, people\'s lives are the most important among all things.
However, the people who are young tend to set importance on own\'s selection in their life.
>> However, young people tend to set importance on own\'s selection of life.
As a young people, I suppose it is reasonable for some people who undergone hard time from disease.
>> As a young person, I supposed euthanasia is reasonable for some people who undergone hard time because of diseased or illnesses.
It is not consistent every time for me, and I do not think it is only answer for us to judge it.
>> It is not consistent for me, and I don\'t think it is the only answer for us to judge it.
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