my voice...
학생이 쓴 원문
Oh Ms.Lei
I am so sorry for my voice everyday.
I usually get up at 8:30~8:45 and get your call at 9:00
so you are always hearing my sleepy voice.
Whenever I listen to my voice through the record for review, it seems to be upset or depressed.^^
anyway thank you for teaching me and have a great day^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
You don't have to say about your voice. Actually you are not the only who sounds upset, depressed or sleepy while having a class. I understand that our schedule is quite early. By the way, just call me Lei. :-)
Regards!!!
Oh Ms. [Name]
>>CorrectI am so sorry for my voice everyday.
>>I am sorry about my voice todayI usually get up at 8:30~8:45 and get your call at 9:00
>>I usually get up from 8:30 - 8:45 then answer your call at 9:00so you are always hearing my sleepy voice.
>>That뭩 why my voice always sounds sleepy.Whenever I listen to my voice through the record for review, it seems to be upset or depressed.^^
>>Whenever I listen to our class recording, it seems that I sound upset or depressedanyway thank you for teaching me and have a great day^^
>>Correct
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