my voice...

2010-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

Oh Ms.Lei I am so sorry for my voice everyday. I usually get up at 8:30~8:45 and get your call at 9:00 so you are always hearing my sleepy voice. Whenever I listen to my voice through the record for review, it seems to be upset or depressed.^^ anyway thank you for teaching me and have a great day^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], You don't have to say about your voice. Actually you are not the only who sounds upset, depressed or sleepy while having a class. I understand that our schedule is quite early. By the way, just call me Lei. :-) Regards!!!   Oh Ms. [Name] >>CorrectI am so sorry for my voice everyday. >>I am sorry about my voice todayI usually get up at 8:30~8:45 and get your call at 9:00 >>I usually get up from 8:30 -  8:45 then answer your call at 9:00so you are always hearing my sleepy voice. >>That뭩 why my voice always sounds sleepy.Whenever I listen to my voice through the record for review, it seems to be upset or depressed.^^ >>Whenever I listen to our class recording, it seems that I sound upset or depressedanyway thank you for teaching me and have a great day^^ >>Correct

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