My way of confronting disappointment

2014-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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When I confront disappointment, I normally try to have a smile, so other people call me a positive man. For example, maybe around 20 years old, even when I was declined my first love proposal by a girl, I also favored her kindness. I continued to do kindly, eventually, she accepted my love, now that when I am 39 years old, she is my wife. I know that the way everybody handles disappointment is different by each other, but I also know that people can change disappointment or failure into success. The most important thing is not to give up. It means giving up yourself life at the time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! You are indeed a positive person! I am impressed with your love story. Not only you are positive but also persistent. Take care and have a wonderful day! T. JanE ^^ When I confront disappointment, I normally try to have a smile, so other people call me a positive man. >> Correct or >> When I am disappointed, I normally face it with a smile, so other people call me a positive man. For example, maybe around 20 years old, even when I was declined my first love proposal by a girl, I also favored her kindness. >> For example, I was about 20 years old when my love proposal to a girl was rejected, but I still showed her kindness.  I continued to do kindly, eventually, she accepted my love, now that when I am 39 years old, she is my wife.>> I continued treating her kindly, then she eventually accepted my love. Now that I\'m 39 years old, she is already my wife. I know that the way everybody handles disappointment is different by each other, but I also know that people can change disappointment or failure into success. >> I know that the way people handle disappointment is different from each other, but I also know that people can turn disappointment or failure into success.  The most important thing is not to give up. >> Correct It means giving up yourself life at the time. >> It means not giving up in life.

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