my weakness

It's important to know my own strengths and weaknesses. More important thing is to improve. Once I have made up my mind, I always try to do my best. I have various weaknesses. First I am too shy to say hello for acquaintance except very close friends. Second I am little bit headstrong person. Most of all, my worst weakness is anxiety. Always I am excessive anxiety, sometimes anxiety showed my body like a psychogenic reaction. I feel it is disorder, very often. I don't know whether it is my natural character or not. I feel uncomfortable and I want to change my character. Perhaps the real reason what makes me uncomfortable is to want to change my character not being character. To accept me is probably answer.

  Hi [이름], I read your candid article. Hmm you only talked about your weakness. Despite of that weakness I’m sure you’ve got a lot of strengths, right? I hope you can write about it, too. Other than that, I like the way you explained your weaknesses in an orderly manner.  See you in class, Connie It's important to know my own strengths and weaknesses. >> Correct More important thing is to improve. >> Correct >> The most important thing is to be open for improvements. - better Once I have made up my mind, I always try to do my best. >> Correct I have various weaknesses. >> Correct First I am too shy to say hello for acquaintance except very close friends. >> First, I am too shy to say hello to my acquaintances except for my close friends. Second I am little bit headstrong person. >> Second, I’m a little bit hard-headed person. Most of all, my worst weakness is anxiety. >> Correct Always I am excessive anxiety, sometimes anxiety showed my body like a psychogenic reaction. >> I always feel excessive anxiety that is sometimes show up like a psychogenic reaction in my body. I feel it is disorder, very often. >> Oftentimes, I feel that it is a disorder. I don't know whether it is my natural character or not. >> Correct I feel uncomfortable and I want to change my character. >> Correct Perhaps the real reason what makes me uncomfortable is to want to change my character not being character. >> Perhaps the real reason for me to be uncomfortable is because I want to improve my character. To accept me is probably answer. >> To accept my weaknesses is the probable answer.