My weakness that hinders mi from accomplishing my goals.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two weaknesses that keep me from accomplishing my goals.
Firstly, I have a hard time starting pursuing my goals. For me, it seems like a lot of energy to pursue any important goals. If something becomes \'important\' I tend to be under pressure. Because of this, I often begin to do what I have to do at the last second.
Moreover, I am not a kind of person that says \'Just do it\'. Even though I can challenge myself to accomplish something new, I tend to overthink that leads me to not actually do it.
In conclusion, I believe I have some weaknesses, but I can overcome these traits by focusing on my strength.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I always appreciate how you write down your thoughts about the questions. It looks so genuine~ I hope we can always overcome whatever hinders us in pursuing what we want ^_^
Chammy
There are two weaknesses that keep me from accomplishing my goals.
>>Correct
Firstly, I have a hard time starting pursuing my goals.
Firstly, I have a hard time starting pursuing my goals.
>>Correct
OR
>>First of all, I find it difficult to get started on my goals.
For me, it seems like a lot of energy to pursue any important goals.
>> For me, it seems to take a lot of energy to pursue any important goals.
OR
>>I think it would take a lot of energy to achieve any significant goals
If something becomes \'important\' I tend to be under pressure. Because of this, I often begin to do what I have to do at the last second.
>>Correct
OR
>>When something gets \"important,\" I usually feel pressured. As a result, I frequently start working on my tasks at the last minute.
Moreover, I am not a kind of person that says \'Just do it\'. Even though I can challenge myself to accomplish something new, I tend to overthink that leads me to not actually do it.
>>Moreover, I am not the kind of person that says \'Just do it\'. Even though I can challenge myself to accomplish something new, I tend to overthink which leads me to not actually do it.
Moreover, I am not a kind of person that says \'Just do it\'. Even though I can challenge myself to accomplish something new, I tend to overthink that leads me to not actually do it.
>>Moreover, I am not the kind of person that says \'Just do it\'. Even though I can challenge myself to accomplish something new, I tend to overthink which leads me to not actually do it.
In conclusion, I believe I have some weaknesses, but I can overcome these traits by focusing on my strength.
>> In conclusion, I believe I have some weaknesses, but I can overcome these traits by focusing on my strengths.
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