My wedding anniversary

2020-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening Gabby teacher ! Today is my wedding anniversary. I had a lunch with my family in the Cafe In Shin hyun ri. Of course I didn\'t recevive a gift also I can\'t gave my husband. We don\'t think important of anniversaries. Every day is an anniversary. I love my family.I thanks them who they are in the around. Today is cleaning day our house. We clean home with my family of a time a week. So I am very tired. My things are a diary,a reading glasses,a desk,a dress room, etc I take care of my things very well. Thank you Gabby.

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan.

Thanks for doing your homework. Great job!

Good evening Gabby teacher !
>> Good evening, Teacher Gabby!
Today is my wedding anniversary. I had a lunch with my family in the Cafe In Shin hyun ri.

>> Today is our wedding anniversay. I had lunch with my family in Cafe In Shin Hyun ri.
Of course I didn\'t recevive a gift also I can\'t gave my husband.

>> I didn\'t receive a gift and I was not able to give one to my husband also.

We don\'t think important of anniversaries.

>> We don\'t that it\'s important for our anniversary.
Every day is an anniversary. I love my family.

>> Everyday is our anniversary for me because I love my family.

I thanks them who they are in the around.

>> I thank them for they are with me.

Today is cleaning day our house.

>> Today is our cleaning day at home.

We clean home with my family of a time a week. So I am very tired.

>> We clean our home once a week that\'s why I am very tired today.
My things are a diary,a reading glasses,a desk,a dress room, etc

>> My things are my diary, reading glasses, desk, dressing room, etc.
I take care of my things very well.

>> I take care of my things well.
Thank you Gabby.

>> Correct.

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