My weekend
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I gave a presentation new business plan to my CEO last friday.
He was very satisfied. We went to drink from 4 PM. He liked bottoms up.
we drank until 10 PM.
I got a snoot full.
I seemed like zoombi last saturday.
I ate Haejangguk and I was put on a IV at home. my wife is nurse.
Do you know Mandu ?.
Mandu is traditional food of china.
I cooked dumpling with my family yesterday.
I and my wife went to traditional market. I bought much food ingredients.
My wife didn`t like.
I wanted to make a lot of dumpling. but My wife didn`t want.
Anyway we made one hundred.
I wanted to injoy with my family. but Cooking was hard.
I prepared food ingredients for one hour and maked dumpling for two hours
and I washed dishes for one hour .
But I was happy.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir John.
>>>> I gave a presentation on the new business plan to my CEO last Friday.
He was very satisfied.
>>>> correct
We went to drink from 4 PM.
>>>> We went for a drink at 4PM.
He liked bottoms up.
>>>> OR: He liked drinking bottoms up.
we drank until 10 PM.
we drank until 10 PM.
>>>> We drank until 10 PM.
I got a snoot full.
I got a snoot full.
>>>> correct.
I seemed like zoombi last saturday.
I seemed like zoombi last saturday.
>>>> I seemed like a zombie last Saturday.
I ate Haejangguk and I was put on a IV at home. my wife is nurse.
I ate Haejangguk and I was put on a IV at home. my wife is nurse.
>>>> I ate Haejangguk and I was put on an IV at home. My wife is a nurse.
Do you know Mandu ?
>>>> OR: Do you know what \'mandu\' is?
Mandu is traditional food of china.
Mandu is traditional food of china.
>>>> Mandu is a traditional food from China.
I cooked dumpling with my family yesterday.
I cooked dumpling with my family yesterday.
>>>> correct
I and my wife went to traditional market.
I and my wife went to traditional market.
>>>> My wife and I went to a traditional market.
I bought much food ingredients.
>>>> I bought too much ingredients.
My wife didn`t like.
My wife didn`t like.
>>>> My wife didn\'t like it.
I wanted to make a lot of dumpling. but My wife didn`t want.
I wanted to make a lot of dumpling. but My wife didn`t want.
>>>> I wanted to make a lot of dumplings but my wife disagreed to it.
Anyway we made one hundred.
Anyway we made one hundred.
>>>> We made a hundred of it anyway.
I wanted to injoy with my family. but Cooking was hard.
I wanted to injoy with my family. but Cooking was hard.
>>>> I wanted to enjoy doing it with my family but cooking was hard.
I prepared food ingredients for one hour and maked dumpling for two hour and I washed dishes for one hour .
I prepared food ingredients for one hour and maked dumpling for two hour and I washed dishes for one hour .
>>>> I prepared the food ingredients for an hour and made dumplings for two hours, then I washed dishes for another hour.
But I was happy.
But I was happy.
>>>> Nevertheless, I was happy.
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