My Weekend.
학생이 쓴 원문
Last Saturday was rainy day. Temperature was lower than as usual. I was supposed to clean up our home. But, the weather made me lazy.
I just drank a cup of coffee with my wife. My two children went out to play with their friends. So, we could have peaceful time. Sunday\'s weather was the best to go out. I love coffee and my wife loves visiting a cafe. We couldn\'t stand to stay home. We visited a cafe which is located out side of city. I ordered a cup of Cafe Vienna. I love a coffee without milk or cream, but the weather made me to order soft and sweet coffee. The coffee was too sweet to enjoy. After drinking it, I felt wired in my stomach. The last week was quite good, because I had spent time with my family and coffee.
강사 첨삭
Last Saturday was rainy day.
>> Last Saturday, it was a rainy day.
Temperature was lower than as usual.
>> The temperature was lower than usual.
I was supposed to clean up our home.
>> I was supposed to clean our home.
But, the weather made me lazy.
>> Correct.
I just drank a cup of coffee with my wife.
>> Correct.
My two children went out to play with their friends.
>> Correct.
So, we could have peaceful time.
>> So, we could have a peaceful time.
Sunday\'s weather was the best to go out.
>> Last Sunday\'s weather was the best for going out.
I love coffee and my wife loves visiting a cafe.
>> I love coffee and my wife loves visiting cafes\'.
We couldn\'t stand to stay home. We visited a cafe which is located out side of city.
>> We couldn\'t stand to stay home. We visited a cafe which is located outside of the city.
I ordered a cup of Cafe Vienna. I love a coffee without milk or cream, but the weather made me to order soft and sweet coffee.
>> I ordered a cup of Cafe Vienna. I love my coffee without milk or cream, but the weather made me order a soft and sweet kind.
The coffee was too sweet to enjoy.
>> Correct.
After drinking it, I felt wired in my stomach.
>> After drinking it, I felt something weird in my stomach.
The last week was quite good, because I had spent time with my family and coffee.
>> The last weekend was quite good for me because I spent my time with my family and something I love the most, coffee.
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