My weekend
학생이 쓴 원문
In weekend , I usually spend a great portion of time in my house.
When I dated someone , I would go out to watch a movie and eat a dinner.
But now I am single. and I don't have many friends to hang out
because I live far from my hometown.
Watching films is regular thing I do in weekend.
but I don't be in house all the time.
when sun sets , I ride a bicycle around my neighborhood listening
to music.
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-Teacher JM.
In weekend , I usually spend a great portion of time in my house.>>>On weekends, I usually spend a great portion of my time in my house.When I dated someone , I would go out to watch a movie and eat a dinner.>>>When I was dating someone, we would go out to watch a movie and eat dinner.But now I am single. and I don't have many friends to hang out>>>But now I am single and I don't have many friends to hang out withbecause I live far from my hometown.>>>Correct!!Watching films is regular thing I do in weekend.>>>Watching films is a regular thing that I do on weekends.but I don't be in house all the time.>>>but I don't want to be at the house all the time.when sun sets , I ride a bicycle around my neighborhood listeningto music.
>>>when the sun sets, I would ride a bicycle around my neighborhood while listening to music.
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