My weekend.
학생이 쓴 원문
The weather is too hot in Korea.
If i go out it's like a sauna so many people hate to go out.
So i went nowhere in weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Sorry to hear about your boring weekend. I was hoping to hear great stories from you. Anyway, the weather is really crazy these days. Sometimes it\'s rainy, sometimes it\'s sunny. Bear with it for a while and always be prepared okay? Let\'s talk later! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
The weather is too hot in Korea.
>> CORRECT
OR >> It\'s too hot in Korea nowadays.If i go out it\'s like a sauna so many people hate to go out.
>> CORRECT
OR >> If I go out, it feels like I\'m in the sauna. This is why many people hate going out these days.So i went nowhere in weekend.
>> CORRECT
OR >> So I didn\'t go anywhere this weekend.
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