My weekend
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I worked at a medical center last saturday for part time, because I am waiting to attend new hospital,and I didn't have any job. Then, after finishing part time work, I did the shopping that I bought a pants and jacket by my pay. It was so good, and while I was going home, I bought spicy needle.That is the most spicy taste noodle in Korea.I like it very much. On sunday, I woke up late in the morning.
But, as I had enough time to take a rest, I felt so good and happy.
Sunday was very relaxative day. I satisfied last weekend.
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Happy Monday [이름]!
I'm so glad that you had a great time last weekend. Oh ,by the way, I like spicy food as well. That's something we have in common. You take care always. Stay cool!
Monica
I worked at a medical center last saturday for part time, because I am waiting to attend new hospital,and I didn't have any job.
>>>I worked in a medical center last Saturday as part time because I didn't have a job and I was waiting to attend in a new hospital.
Then, after finishing part time work, I did the shopping that I bought a pants and jacket by my pay.
>>>I went shopping for pants and jacket after I'm done with my work.
It was so good, and while I was going home, I bought spicy needle.
>>>It was so good, and on my way home, I bought a spicy noodle.
That is the most spicy taste noodle in Korea.I like it very much.
>>>That's the most spicy tasting noodle in Korea. I like it very much.
On Sunday, I woke up late in the morning.
>>>correctBut, as I had enough time to take a rest, I felt so good and happy.
>>>Because I had enough time to take a rest, I felt so good and happy.Sunday was very relaxative day. I satisfied last weekend.
>>>Sunday was a very relaxing day. I was satisfied last weekend.
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