My weekend
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This week was my first week to attend a new company,so I got nervous and tired. On saturday, I woke up late in the morning, then,prepared to go out for strolling.Although I was tired, I need some action for relexing my body. I went to Jam sil, and went around store road where there are many store on the underground road. It was good time, After finishing shopping, I bought one cup of coffee at the Starbucks, I like coffee very much. Then, While I was drinking coffee, I came back home. On sunday, I stayed home for tomorrow,I spent comfortable day which had a day sleep and ate many foods. And, while I am arranging my weekend, I also expect to have a nice week from tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Wow! It's good to know that you actually had time to enjoy and relax during
the weekend. Oh by the way, I love coffee too, haha. That's one thing we
have in common aside from being pretty (ha. ha. ha) I'm hoping that you
would coninue to have a wonderful week. Take care!
Monica
This week was my first week to attend a new company,so I got nervous and tired.
>>>correct
On saturday, I woke up late in the morning, then,prepared to go out for strolling.
>>>correct
Although I was tired, I need some action for relexing my body.
>>>Although I was tired, I needed some action to relax my body.
I went to Jam sil, and went around store road where there are many store on the underground road.
>>>correct
It was good time, After finishing shopping, I bought one cup of coffee at the Starbucks, I like coffee very much.
>>>I really had a good time. After I finish shopping, I bought a cup of coffee at Starbucks. I like coffee very much.
Then, While I was drinking coffee, I came back home.
>>>correct
On sunday, I stayed home for tomorrow,I spent comfortable day which had a day sleep and ate many foods.
>>>On Sunday, I just stayed home for tomorrow. I spent a comfortable day sleeping and eating a lot of food.
And, while I am arranging my weekend, I also expect to have a nice week from tomorrow.
>>>And while I was enjoying my weekend I also expected to have a nice week starting tomorrow.
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