My weekend

2010-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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This week was my first week to attend a new company,so I got nervous and tired. On saturday, I woke up late in the morning, then,prepared to go out for strolling.Although I was tired, I need some action for relexing my body. I went to Jam sil, and went around store road where there are many store on the underground road. It was good time, After finishing shopping, I bought one cup of coffee at the Starbucks, I like coffee very much. Then, While I was drinking coffee, I came back home. On sunday, I stayed home for tomorrow,I spent comfortable day which had a day sleep and ate many foods. And, while I am arranging my weekend, I also expect to have a nice week from tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Wow!  It's good to know that you actually had time to enjoy and relax during the weekend.  Oh by the way,  I love coffee too, haha.  That's one thing we have in common aside from being pretty (ha. ha. ha) I'm hoping that you  would coninue to have a wonderful week.  Take care! Monica   This week was my first week to attend a new company,so I got nervous and tired. >>>correct  On saturday, I woke up late in the morning, then,prepared to go out for strolling. >>>correct Although I was tired, I need some action for relexing my body. >>>Although I was tired, I needed some action to relax my body. I went to Jam sil, and went around store road where there are many store on the underground road. >>>correct It was good time, After finishing shopping, I bought one cup of coffee at the Starbucks, I like coffee very much. >>>I really had a good time.  After I finish shopping,  I bought a cup of coffee at Starbucks.  I like coffee very much. Then, While I was drinking coffee, I came back home. >>>correct  On sunday, I stayed home for tomorrow,I spent comfortable day which had a day sleep and ate many foods. >>>On Sunday,  I just stayed home for tomorrow.  I spent a comfortable day sleeping and eating a lot of food. And, while I am arranging my weekend, I also expect to have a nice week from tomorrow. >>>And  while I was enjoying my weekend I also expected to have a nice week starting tomorrow.

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