My weekend

2013-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

학생이 쓴 원문

My weekend is very busy Because I go to academy~ Morever, I have three academy on Saturday, and I have a academy on Sunday!!! I want to take a rest with my friends!! But, I should do my homework,,, I hope to play with my friends on weekend!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sarah!You must be very proud of yourself because you just got through your weekend.Take things easy, okay?By the way, I also have to thank you for allotting some of your precious time for this composition.I truly appreciate your effort in sending this in.May you have a great week and hopefully, you can play with your friends this coming weekend.See you later!^^ ~~T. Heidi _^-^_My weekend is very busy>>CorrectOR >> I have a busy weekend.>> I am busy during weekends.Because I go to academy~>>This is because I have to go to the academy.Morever, I have three academy on Saturday, and I have a academy on Sunday!!!>>Moreover, I have three academy classes on Saturday and I have another one on Sunday!I want to take a rest with my friends!!>>CorrectOR >> I want to hang out with my friends!But, I should do my homework,,,>>CorrectOR >> But then, I have to do my homework.^^I hope to play with my friends on weekend!!>>CorrectOR >> I hope I can play with my friends on weekends!^^

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