my weekend

2019-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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Teacher, do you have a plan on weekend? maybe I will get off work at 5p.m. and then go to gwanghwanmun to meet my friend. there is a good place that we meet. bacause there is convenient for transportation. after meeting my friend, I will come back my home. If I get a chance, I meet my parents. I didnt see them for three months. I was busy. I wonder why they did not come here.. I think that they take care of my cousin. He lives in my parent’s home and prepare of the police test. I hope he pass the test sincerely.

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Teacher, do you have a plan on weekend?

>>Teacher, do you have a plan during weekends?


 maybe I will get off work at 5p.m.and then go to gwanghwanmun to meet my friend.

>> Maybe I will get off work at 5 p.m. and then go to gwanghwanmun to meet my friend.


there is a good place that we meet. bacause there is convenient for transportation.

>>There is a good place where we usually meet, it is very convenient because of the transportation system.


 after meeting my friend, I will come back my home.

>> After meeting my friend, I will come back to my home.


 If I get a chance, I meet my parents.

>>CORRECT


I didn\'t see them for three months. I was busy.

>>CORRECT


 I wonder why they did not come here.

>>CORRECT


 I think that they take care of my cousin.

>> I think they took care of my cousin.


 He lives in my parent’s home and prepare of the police test. I hope he pass the test sincerely.

>>He lives in my parent’s home and he is preparing for a police test. I sincerely hope he passes the test.


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