My weekend activities
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In Saturday, I went to my friend’s house and we had a meal together. Also we ate chocolate ice cream corns, which is my favorite ice cream. And we took a photo of us. Even though I was tired, I enjoyed the time with her. She always makes me happy and vice versa. In Sunday, I stayed at home all day, painting a picture and watching TV. It was boring but my right leg was little hurt So I had to rest on bed.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing. :)
- T. Gabby :)
In Saturday, I went to my friend’s house and we had a meal together.
>> Last Saturday, I went to my friend’s house and we ate together.
Also we ate chocolate ice cream corns, which is my favorite ice cream.
>> Correct.
And we took a photo of us.
>> Correct.
Even though I was tired, I enjoyed the time with her.
>> Even though I was tired, I enjoyed my time with her.
She always makes me happy and vice versa.
>> Correct.
In Sunday, I stayed at home all day, painting a picture and watching TV.
>> Last Sunday, I stayed at home all day, painted a picture and watched TV.
It was boring but my right leg was little hurt So I had to rest on bed.
>> It was boring but my right leg was a little hurt so I had to rest on my bed.
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