My weekend activity
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Gabby~
Today is Sunday. It is hat here. How\'s it weather there.
I woke up early this morning. After breakfast, we went to the BulGok mountain nearby my house.
We came down before lunch and we had SamGyeTang at restaurant.
I felt changed taste foods.
By the way I am tired but I have to works.
That is puted in freezer on grinding galic bought yesterday.
On Friday, I strolled around my apartment with my friend.
She is real estate office manage with her husband at nearby our apartment.
She and I usually go to in the coffee shop or stroll a village.
I moved to here before 5 years and I had two friend at neighborhood.
One friend moved to another city ago two years then I only leave one friend.
On saturday, I cooked beef ribs stew and roast beef to lunch for my family.
I was busy to cook. After lunch dish washing did my husband.
You have a good toneght.
See you at MondayGabby!
From Susan.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Wow! You had a beautiful weekend.
-T. Gabby :)
Hi Gabby!
>> Correct.
Today is Sunday. It is hat here. How\'s it weather there.
>> How is the weather there? It\' Sunday here and it\'s hot.
I woke up early this morning.
>> Correct.
After breakfast, we went to the BulGok mountain nearby my house.
>> Correct.
We came down before lunch and we had SamGyeTang at restaurant.
>> We went donw before lunch and we had Samgyetang in a restaurant.
I felt changed taste foods.
>> Their foods\' taste changed.
By the way I am tired but I have to works.
>> I was feeling tired but I have to work.
That is puted in freezer on grinding galic bought yesterday.
>> I have to grind garlic from the freezer that I bought yesterday.
On Friday, I strolled around my apartment with my friend.
>> Last Friday, I strolled around my apartment with my friend.
She is real estate office manage with her husband at nearby our apartment.
>> She\'s a real estate offfice manager with her husband and they live nearby our apartment.
She and I usually go to in the coffee shop or stroll a village.
>> We usually usually hang out in the coffee shop and stroll around the village.
I moved to here before 5 years and I had two friend at neighborhood.
>> We moved here 5 years ago and I now have 2 friends from neighborhood.
One friend moved to another city ago two years then I only leave one friend.
>> A friend moved to another city two years ago so that leaves me with one friend.
On saturday, I cooked beef ribs stew and roast beef to lunch for my family.
>> Last Saturday, I cooked beef ribs stew and roast beef for lunch and ate with my family.
I was busy to cook. After lunch dish washing did my husband.
>> I was busy cooking then my husband washed the dishes.
You have a good toneght.
>> Have a good night.
See you at MondayGabby!
>> See you on Monday, Gabby.
From Susan.
>> Correct.
-T. Gabby :)
Hi Gabby!
>> Correct.
Today is Sunday. It is hat here. How\'s it weather there.
>> How is the weather there? It\' Sunday here and it\'s hot.
I woke up early this morning.
>> Correct.
After breakfast, we went to the BulGok mountain nearby my house.
>> Correct.
We came down before lunch and we had SamGyeTang at restaurant.
>> We went donw before lunch and we had Samgyetang in a restaurant.
I felt changed taste foods.
>> Their foods\' taste changed.
By the way I am tired but I have to works.
>> I was feeling tired but I have to work.
That is puted in freezer on grinding galic bought yesterday.
>> I have to grind garlic from the freezer that I bought yesterday.
On Friday, I strolled around my apartment with my friend.
>> Last Friday, I strolled around my apartment with my friend.
She is real estate office manage with her husband at nearby our apartment.
>> She\'s a real estate offfice manager with her husband and they live nearby our apartment.
She and I usually go to in the coffee shop or stroll a village.
>> We usually usually hang out in the coffee shop and stroll around the village.
I moved to here before 5 years and I had two friend at neighborhood.
>> We moved here 5 years ago and I now have 2 friends from neighborhood.
One friend moved to another city ago two years then I only leave one friend.
>> A friend moved to another city two years ago so that leaves me with one friend.
On saturday, I cooked beef ribs stew and roast beef to lunch for my family.
>> Last Saturday, I cooked beef ribs stew and roast beef for lunch and ate with my family.
I was busy to cook. After lunch dish washing did my husband.
>> I was busy cooking then my husband washed the dishes.
You have a good toneght.
>> Have a good night.
See you at MondayGabby!
>> See you on Monday, Gabby.
From Susan.
>> Correct.
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