My weekend plan

2010-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

학생이 쓴 원문

On July 25th sunday, I've got my Toeic test. During last month, I didn't prepare for Toeic test so feelings between regret and uneasiness are crossed by each other. Anyway, although time passed, I must have to test. Once I will go to the library and study very hard tomorrow. I have made preparation for Toeic test because of the reason that I want to be admitted into the University of my aim. But, My score of Toeic is still insufficient. Recently, My attention relaxes so I brace myself up. And I will make every effort for my goal.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!..I’m glad that you send me email. First of all in studying, you must have a study plan for you to follow everyday. And don’t think negative thoughts especially that your IELTS test is fast approaching. I believe you can do it!...Good preparation is the key!...Good luck!   On July 25th sunday, I've got my Toeic test. >>>Last July 25,Sunday..I took my TOEIC test. During last month, I didn't prepare for Toeic test so feelings between regret and uneasiness are crossed by each other. >>>Last month, I didn’t prepare for my TEOIC test so feelings of regret and uneasiness are crossed by each other. Anyway, although time passed, I must have to test. >>>Anyway, although time passed, I must have to take the test. Once I will go to the library and study very hard tomorrow. >>>I will go to the library and study very hard tomorrow. I have made preparation for Toeic test because of the reason that I want to be admitted into the University of my aim. >>>I prepared for my TOEIC test because of the reason that I want to be admitted into the University  of my Aim. But, My score of Toeic is still insufficient. Recently, My attention relaxes so I brace myself up. >>>But, my score of TOEIC is still not enough. Recently, my attention relaxes so I brace myself up. And I will make every effort for my goal. >>>And I will make effort for every goal I have.

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