My weekend plan
학생이 쓴 원문
On July 25th sunday, I've got my Toeic test.
During last month, I didn't prepare for Toeic test so feelings between regret and uneasiness are crossed by each other.
Anyway, although time passed, I must have to test.
Once I will go to the library and study very hard tomorrow.
I have made preparation for Toeic test because of the reason that
I want to be admitted into the University of my aim.
But, My score of Toeic is still insufficient. Recently, My attention relaxes so I brace myself up.
And I will make every effort for my goal.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!..I’m glad that you send me email. First of all in studying, you must have a study plan for you to follow everyday. And don’t think negative thoughts especially that your IELTS test is fast approaching. I believe you can do it!...Good preparation is the key!...Good luck!
On July 25th sunday, I've got my Toeic test.
>>>Last July 25,Sunday..I took my TOEIC test.
During last month, I didn't prepare for Toeic test so feelings between regret and uneasiness are crossed by each other.
>>>Last month, I didn’t prepare for my TEOIC test so feelings of regret and uneasiness are crossed by each other.
Anyway, although time passed, I must have to test.
>>>Anyway, although time passed, I must have to take the test.
Once I will go to the library and study very hard tomorrow.
>>>I will go to the library and study very hard tomorrow.
I have made preparation for Toeic test because of the reason that
I want to be admitted into the University of my aim.
>>>I prepared for my TOEIC test because of the reason that I want to be admitted into the University of my Aim.
But, My score of Toeic is still insufficient. Recently, My attention relaxes so I brace myself up.
>>>But, my score of TOEIC is still not enough. Recently, my attention relaxes so I brace myself up.
And I will make every effort for my goal.
>>>And I will make effort for every goal I have.
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