my weekend plan.

2010-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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this weekend i am going to travel with my boyfriend. the place is not far from my hometown. Actually It's my hometown. Yes, It's Tong-Yeong. First reason why we choose the place is My boyfriend has some advantage to use a resort which is being called Marina Resort.The Resort is located at seaside of Tong - Yeong. And Second reason is I have to work until Saturday noon. So we decided to travel in Tong - Yeong. I am going to cook some special dishes for my boy friend. Such as cutlet and jigae. Whereas visting the other place is good experience to us, there are also good place in my hometown. Have a great weekend.~

강사 첨삭

this weekend i am going to travel with my boyfriend. Actually It's my hometown. I will be spending the weekend with my boyfriend and  it뭩 actually located here in Tong � Yeong.   First reason why we choose the place is My boyfriend has some advantage to use a resort which is being called Marina Resort. The Resort is located at seaside of Tong � Yeong  And Second reason is I have to work until Saturday noon. The reason why we chose to spend the weekend  here is because my boyfriend wants to go to the Marina resort, and I have to work until Saturday noon.   I am going to cook some special dishes for my boyfriend. Such as cutlet and jigae  I am going to cook special dishes, such as cutlets and jigae.   Whereas visting the other place is good experience to us, there are also good place in my hometown.    Going out of town is a good/fun experience for us, but there are also good/beautiful places here in Tong- Yeong as well.   *omit  - So we decided to travel in Tong � Yeong Simplify your sentences as much as possible.  

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